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Name: Sam
9 years old
NY
Chapter 1
The Scary Nightmare
One Friday night I was watching a scary movie just like any other Friday. There was just only one difference. This movie was so scary I had 11 nightmares in one night! But 1 nightmare was scarier than all 11. One day my mother told me to go and pick a few berries with my friends who I invited over for a play date. Even though it was raining , I agreed. I quickly spotted a nearby forest and I went by myself completely forgetting my friends had no idea where I went. The moment I entered the forest I was surprisingly lost. At that moment I remembered what I was doing , I left my friends behind, I have no food, I have no water, Mother Nature is everywhere, and there are wild animals everywhere! But most importantly my friends and family will be worried!!!
Chapter 2
Surviving the Wild
After I calmed myself down I decided to keep going. As I was walking I heard growling and howling in the distance. I was so scared I couldn’t say a word. Every step I took I was feeling more scared and scared. I knew we never should have went to Poconos. I thought it was a vacation! I especially should have never agreed to go and pick berries just for my mom to buy a stupid vacation from Poconos to Canada. Well I stopped arguing and continued. Suddenly I heard a loud growl. Sort of like a big angry dog bark, only louder. I turned around. Then turned back and saw a gigantic fury and angry Grizzly! I stood there and looked at the bear terrified. The bear looked like he was deciding either to eat me or not. I slowly started to walk away and soon my footsteps turned into running. I lost the bear.
Chapter 3
Surviving Mother Nature/Fleeing From the ForestAs I was walking I noticed the weather was getting chilly. The night sky was darker than usual. Suddenly I saw and heard a spark. It sounded like a big drum. Then I saw light. I decided to check it out. And to my surprise I saw my friends surrounded by fire probably caused by a lightning bolt! My friends probably tried to come after me! “Jump and I will catch you’’, I said. Without arguing my friends jumped on top of me. Then got off. ‘’Do any of you know the way out?’’, I asked. “Yes, you were going the other way’’, they said. We quickly ran away from the forest and my friends, my mother, and I lived very well in our new vacation home.
www.familytc.com
Name: Sam
9 years old
NY
Chapter 1
The Scary Nightmare
One Friday night I was watching a scary movie just like any other Friday. There was just only one difference. This movie was so scary I had 11 nightmares in one night! But 1 nightmare was scarier than all 11. One day my mother told me to go and pick a few berries with my friends who I invited over for a play date. Even though it was raining , I agreed. I quickly spotted a nearby forest and I went by myself completely forgetting my friends had no idea where I went. The moment I entered the forest I was surprisingly lost. At that moment I remembered what I was doing , I left my friends behind, I have no food, I have no water, Mother Nature is everywhere, and there are wild animals everywhere! But most importantly my friends and family will be worried!!!
Chapter 2
Surviving the Wild
After I calmed myself down I decided to keep going. As I was walking I heard growling and howling in the distance. I was so scared I couldn’t say a word. Every step I took I was feeling more scared and scared. I knew we never should have went to Poconos. I thought it was a vacation! I especially should have never agreed to go and pick berries just for my mom to buy a stupid vacation from Poconos to Canada. Well I stopped arguing and continued. Suddenly I heard a loud growl. Sort of like a big angry dog bark, only louder. I turned around. Then turned back and saw a gigantic fury and angry Grizzly! I stood there and looked at the bear terrified. The bear looked like he was deciding either to eat me or not. I slowly started to walk away and soon my footsteps turned into running. I lost the bear.
Chapter 3
Surviving Mother Nature/Fleeing From the ForestAs I was walking I noticed the weather was getting chilly. The night sky was darker than usual. Suddenly I saw and heard a spark. It sounded like a big drum. Then I saw light. I decided to check it out. And to my surprise I saw my friends surrounded by fire probably caused by a lightning bolt! My friends probably tried to come after me! “Jump and I will catch you’’, I said. Without arguing my friends jumped on top of me. Then got off. ‘’Do any of you know the way out?’’, I asked. “Yes, you were going the other way’’, they said. We quickly ran away from the forest and my friends, my mother, and I lived very well in our new vacation home.
this is a well written story, especially for such a young age.
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